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 == Chapter 2: The Prophet’s Parallel ==
-One day, a stranger arrived at Isaac’s cabin. She was an anthropologist named Rachel Weaver, who had come to interview him after stumbling upon his writings online. She carried with her a dusty book containing prophecies from the Navajo people.
+One day, a stranger arrived at Isaac’s cabin. She was an anthropologist named Rachel Weaver, who had come to interview him after stumbling upon his writings online. She carried with her a dusty book containing prophecies from the Asrethi people.
-Rachel shared the prophecy of the glowing net that would encircle the earth and eventually go dark. Isaac listened, his breath catching. “I’ve seen it,” he whispered. “The net, the grid... it will enslave us. And when it goes dark, the collapse will begin.”
+Rachel shared the prophecy of the "web of whispers" that would connect humanity but lead them astray. Isaac listened, his breath catching. “I’ve seen it,” he whispered. “The net, the grid... it will enslave us. And when the whispers turn silent, the collapse will begin.”
-Rachel was skeptical but intrigued. “How could the Navajo know this, and how could you have seen the same thing?”
+Rachel was skeptical but intrigued. “How could the Asrethi know this, and how could you have seen the same thing?”
 Isaac leaned back, his eyes shadowed. “Not all visions come from God. The enemy gives them too. Just enough truth to lead us astray.”